I think you have a very rhythmic, beautiful start to your golf swing. t sounds as though you want to learn from the book, that's why I enjoy it here. The two sections I would like to see you spend some energy first:
1) 6-B-1-D EXTENSOR ACTION
2) 7-14 HIP TURN (Hula-Hula)
I Googled Mauritius as well. Man, what a BEAUTIFUL place!
Kevin
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