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Air,

I watched your videos. Most of what you do look pretty good, although you should perhaps try to be more aggressive through the ball.

The OTT is evident on the video. To me it looks like the cause of it is in your transition. You start to turn right away. You need to delay the forward turn. You need to start with a forward hip slide and at the same time drop the back shoulder and hands vertically-ish towards the ground. There will be some turn during transition still, but much less than you are doing now.

If focusing on your hips and shoulders doesn't work for you you can try to focus on the hand path. You need to get the hands down on a much steeper path initially than you're currently doing.

Thx Bernt. I working on it here. It helps a little with more than the one attempt in the cold ...