You had me focused until the last picture. I'm not sure what the paragraph said there, but I agree with all of the diagrams above, so I'll just assume everything else was correct.
Personally, I think the OP is a swinger that needs some fix'in for a quick start down and out instead of down plane right shoulder.
It's tough to convert a swinger to a hitter. Been there done that.
It's a commitment and takes a lot of time to convert. It is nice to hit when needed though.
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